Alone,
Although my solace comforts me
Alone,
Although my soul isn't there
Alone,
When I look deep into you eyes
Alone,
Because your soul isn't there
And now,
This pain, it moves, soothes me
And now
This pain, its too much to bear
And now,
I look into your burdened eyes
And now,
I see your soul isn't there
So now,
Let's move toward the light that bathes us
So now,
Let's forget that life isn't fair
So now,
I look deep into your eyes
So now,
I see that my soul is impaired.
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These are my thoughts. Hopefully my songs of despair will help you realize the intrinsic value in yourself. Perhaps my sonnets of emotion will have a direct impact on your current situation.
Who is GTS?
- GTS
- Washington, DC, United States
- I prefer to remain anonymous. But I am by no means a cold shoulder. Feel free to interact with me, I'd love to hear from you!
Methods and Inspiration
GENERAL:
From time to time, I get emails from people asking about my perspective and my outlook on life. Let me say that I am not depressed or "emo" or anything like that. I am quite happy with myself, but need this outlet to "bleed" feelings into a medium.
METHOD: I do tend to keep things bottled up, and this is a valve to release the steam of life's frustrations. I achieve this by subjecting myself to emotional states; what you recieve is raw emotion. If anything, it is mood trapping and projecting at its most effective.
The downside to this method is that, like any other true empath, the energies can linger with me. Because of this phenomenon, my writings tend to be very draining. But in the end, it is worth it. I want you to feel the same pain I fell as I write.
INSPIRATION: At the end of each month, I will post what my specific inspiration was for each poem in the previous month. This is a nice way for you to understand my perspective, as well as read up on older poems and leave more comments!
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Inspiration:
This poem's premise is an abusive relationship. The type of abuse is irrelevant, as the approach is just a manifestation of the issue.
The one thing that I wanted to stree in this poem is the significance of the other person's eyes. In the first verse, The person cannot see the pain in her eyes, because he only sees himself; that is why he's alone.
As we move to verse two, she has left. He never thought that she could bring him heartache. But now, when he sees her, he sees that her eyes are dead.
Lastly, he is ready to move on; he understands that the relationship is over. And in the last line, he realizes that it was his fault.
-GTS
PS- This poem was very hard for me to write. There was a lot of negative energy that I had to draw to write this. In fact, it was doubly so, as I put myself in both situations. Sadly, I cannot say that either situation was easier than the other.
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